I really LOVED Shakespeare, last year. Romeo and Juliet was really beautiful. And then it gave me a chance to see "Romeo + Juliet" in class. (Leo D! <3)
But this year,
uggh.
IT took me a whole week to write this sonnet!
A WHOLE WEEK!
and to top it off, it needs to be about love, jealousy, or passion.
at the moment, i have none of these. you can't just fake that!
so the gist is, my "sonnet" (if you can call it that) sucks and i need help.
any suggestions would be greatly appreciated.
[don't be too harsh]
A hope of you still races through my mind.
With each awaking day my love renews,
And love from me is all you’ll ever find.
The sun that falls on each and every day,
Will it notice my admiring gaze.
Across the country, you are on your way,
But leaving you would leave me in a daze.
Will loneliness caress me when you’re gone!
And join the willows as they stand and weep
I’ll wait for you until eternal dawn,
Our paths will cross, oh, you just wait and see.
A love from afar is a fantasy.
A love together is a fallacy.
